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This is my first attempt please tell me what you think and dont laugh at my track. I did most of it using reason the vocals are my own.

Here: http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?a ... 8E30BC78B1

Doesn't appear to be particularly structured and the bass overpowers everything. Needs something going on in the midrange and the drums sound overly busy towards the beginning. Maybe have just a pure sub for the bass part and add some more instrumentation elsewhere to fill out the frequencies. I like the vocal echoes though, but they're a bit too far back in the mix, and I think that you could do with a bit more space in the mix, so drop the bass out occassionally to give it more impact when it comes back in.

Shonky good points man. Now that I am listen to it again I think there might be too much going on with the drums. The vocals being far back was intentional but I will try them up more in the mix. Nuff respect.

quite like that, i agree wit shonky, bass bit to overpowering but i really like ur kick drum, nice and soft

quite like that, i agree wit shonky, bass bit to overpowering but i really like ur kick drum, nice and soft