Another 'rate my wank' if you can be arsed

lazytechnician · Post by **lazytechnician** » Sun Sep 14, 2008 10:53 pm

Another 64 bars that might go somewhere, might not, anyone feeling the overall groove/sounds/progression?

http://www.sendspace.com/file/3ahqy2

Any comments good or bad much appreciated.

futures_untold · Post by **futures_untold** » Sun Sep 14, 2008 11:00 pm

Top shelf 'wank'!

I like the mellow gritty vibes intro and the drums agter the drop are pretty driving.

Levels are off and I'd chorus + verb selectively to everything lol

Good stuff!

DZA · Post by **DZA** » Mon Sep 15, 2008 9:14 am

i was a bit sketchy about clicking on this thread thought it was gonna be a website like http://www.ratemypoo.com/ but yea, tunes allgood man keep at it

lazytechnician · Post by **lazytechnician** » Mon Sep 15, 2008 1:53 pm

HA HA!!!!!!!!!!!

Cheers guys, keep em coming!

oblivious · Post by **oblivious** » Mon Sep 15, 2008 3:32 pm

pretty nice, id say keep working on it, put a big drop there at the end and do another 128 bars

darkmatteruk · Post by **darkmatteruk** » Mon Sep 15, 2008 3:34 pm

yea, finish this one and link me a 320 when you do

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http://www.virb.com/darkmatterUK

futures_untold · Post by **futures_untold** » Mon Sep 15, 2008 8:02 pm

darkmatterUK wrote:yea, finish this one and link me a 320 when you do

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http://www.virb.com/darkmatterUK

x2

lazytechnician · Post by **lazytechnician** » Mon Sep 15, 2008 10:40 pm

No worries, all my bits are freebies if i ever get round to finishing them.

got 3 320's up on freedubs as well, (if its still going?)

http://freedubs.org/users/lazytechnician/

xthewiddler · Post by **xthewiddler** » Tue Sep 16, 2008 8:06 am

woo for rate my poo! you have opened a new world to me

blip · Post by **blip** » Tue Sep 16, 2008 8:54 am

I am into the beat, mostly, it's driving and the snare changes are nice.
Like the chords in the beginning, but not too much into the bubbles. Don't think they fit the beat and bass so well.

serox · Post by **serox** » Tue Sep 16, 2008 11:23 am

lazytechnician wrote:Another 64 bars that might go somewhere, might not, anyone feeling the overall groove/sounds/progression?

http://www.sendspace.com/file/3ahqy2

Any comments good or bad much appreciated.

I don't know much so don't take what I say too seriously:)

The kick could do with some EQing, its too muddy. When the bass comes in its too loud and you can hardly hear the kick. The bass doesn't need to be that loud if its playing the right frequencies.

The bubbles could also do with some EQing, remove some of the lower end.

I personally wouldn't change the drum patterns so much in each bar. Instead I would try create a simple groove and repeat, with smaller changes on the 16th.

Good work, now make it longer:D

lazytechnician · Post by **lazytechnician** » Tue Sep 16, 2008 1:25 pm

Serox wrote:
lazytechnician wrote:Another 64 bars that might go somewhere, might not, anyone feeling the overall groove/sounds/progression?

http://www.sendspace.com/file/3ahqy2

Any comments good or bad much appreciated.

I don't know much so don't take what I say too seriously:)

The kick could do with some EQing, its too muddy. When the bass comes in its too loud and you can hardly hear the kick. The bass doesn't need to be that loud if its playing the right frequencies.

The bubbles could also do with some EQing, remove some of the lower end.

I personally wouldn't change the drum patterns so much in each bar. Instead I would try create a simple groove and repeat, with smaller changes on the 16th.

Good work, now make it longer:D

Well, thats just the difference between Redhill and Croydon you see bruv.

Hee hee! just jokes mate, cheers for the feedback!

vision · Post by **vision** » Tue Sep 16, 2008 1:58 pm

lazytechnician wrote:
Serox wrote:
lazytechnician wrote:Another 64 bars that might go somewhere, might not, anyone feeling the overall groove/sounds/progression?

http://www.sendspace.com/file/3ahqy2

Any comments good or bad much appreciated.

I don't know much so don't take what I say too seriously:)

The kick could do with some EQing, its too muddy. When the bass comes in its too loud and you can hardly hear the kick. The bass doesn't need to be that loud if its playing the right frequencies.

The bubbles could also do with some EQing, remove some of the lower end.

I personally wouldn't change the drum patterns so much in each bar. Instead I would try create a simple groove and repeat, with smaller changes on the 16th.

Good work, now make it longer:D

Well, thats just the difference between Redhill and Croydon you see bruv.

Hee hee! just jokes mate, cheers for the feedback!

dont change the drums i like that thay change alot. the intro/1st dum drop bit (and yes that is the technical term lol) is grate. i think its the second bar after the drums drop is sick.

serox · Post by **serox** » Tue Sep 16, 2008 2:23 pm

vision wrote:
dont change the drums i like that thay change alot.

Yep don't listen to me or anyone when it comes to drum patterns/grooves, that's your own thing;)

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