would this mixdown be acceptable to send out to djs?

[digital983]

just a short clip of a new track i done but i dont wanna send it out if the mixdown aint up to scratch.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/194538442754847f/


all feedback good and bad appreciated

[simonoff]

hey,

the track is a bit short

the compositions sounds good to me .. means the elements and structure you used.

but you should improve the overall sound...

some suggestions:

the bassline needs more punch i think...
it just seems to have not enough subs (it has in fact),
but just a little bit of eq-ing on the bassline (lower some mid frequencies)

the snare could be more crispy.. (try to layer a 2nd snare)
or just try some alternative snares(of that kind)

too much middle frequencies in generell. (in my ears)

maybe a look in a frequency analyzer would help ...

and listen to the track on different speakers/systems..
some (very) small , some big, some bad , some good, in the car, ...
that helps a lot

but.. you re not far away from sending away a good-soundin track !!