easy all, i have made a pattern of noises - please comment on it.
old school rolling bassline influences, made for skankin to.
sub and spliff recommended.
http://www.myspace.com/fbrsc
please leave any feedback negative or positive, pretty much one of the first tunes i have ever 'completed'/ this one isnt complete - my computer cant handle the power. only tune in player
PLEASE listen/rate my tune - lean influences v.chilled BASS
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Hope you are after honest feedback / opinions......
The intro synth feels quite uninspired & generic, and gets pretty old staying constant for 90 seconds or so. The bass feels nice & full which is good, and the congos seem quite well done - can almost see a person playing that pattern. Drum pattern is good, although some variation with hats or other percussive elements would be nice. You need a hook of some sort - just something to keep it engaging, by 3:30 or so I gave up on it TBH.
All that said, this song has definite potential. Just work on making it interesting & you'll be good to go.
HTH
The intro synth feels quite uninspired & generic, and gets pretty old staying constant for 90 seconds or so. The bass feels nice & full which is good, and the congos seem quite well done - can almost see a person playing that pattern. Drum pattern is good, although some variation with hats or other percussive elements would be nice. You need a hook of some sort - just something to keep it engaging, by 3:30 or so I gave up on it TBH.
All that said, this song has definite potential. Just work on making it interesting & you'll be good to go.
HTH
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principalcomponent
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I agree the sub bass is nice. My suggestion would be to add more tension to the drum pattern. Dubstep usually sits between 70/140 bpm with the snare at 70 but the hi hats and sometimes the bass implying a double tempo. With this track it's more firmly 70 bpm. It's cool, it just makes it more like a laid back dub track.
The drum pattern is made slightly more hectic at about 6.20 - probably diddnt get that far into listening to it, the first round of assault goe on a bit too long i think.principalcomponent wrote:I agree the sub bass is nice. My suggestion would be to add more tension to the drum pattern. Dubstep usually sits between 70/140 bpm with the snare at 70 but the hi hats and sometimes the bass implying a double tempo. With this track it's more firmly 70 bpm. It's cool, it just makes it more like a laid back dub track.
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