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looking for some feedback on an original
Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 12:56 am
by fairweather
Alright guys,
Any advice on how to improve this would be appreciated. Just been messing around with pro tools, reason and a feedback loop with guitar pedals.
Let me know what you think.
http://www.mediafire.com/?mymmymowmqh
Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 1:35 am
by aftee
you've got potential just a bit ways to go
i'd say for starters, the main problem is it sounds too "stocky" if you know what I mean
FX can be your best friend, throw some reverb here and there, eq some shit, make the sounds blend together as opposed to sounding as if they're being forced together
there are parts of the track I could see turning into something good, they just need some work in terms of sounding better, but the patterns laid out and what not are good
Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 1:45 am
by fairweather
yeh i think you're right, the drum samples are just straight. I'll get to work with some effects and see what I can do.
Thanks for the help.
Any other takers?
Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 9:10 pm
by 1banquet1
like the guy said it feels like 3 songs in one. but for your first time i think it was really good.