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DOES ANYONE LIKE THIS TUNE I MADE?????
Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 12:47 am
by osdenyer
....I'm not sure about it, i need some feed back please.......
its called "Exposure"
www.myspace.com/0verdosedj
Thankyou very much..........
Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 2:43 am
by atma
I really like the overall vibe, and I think that the bassline is fun. On a constructive note, I'd suggest that you decrease the complexity of the melody in the tune over all, and perhaps use a different instrument as opposed to the twinkly stuff, maybe an organ or something more like a piano?
Cheers,
Atma
Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 12:19 pm
by ferrotype music
thats a big tune.
Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 1:47 pm
by osdenyer
Atma, loved the feed back, cheers mate
Ferrotype Music, nice one1
Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 2:03 pm
by monotic
For me, the 'classical' melody doesn't really work. Nice bass programming, though. I'd focus on that. Push it further with more variations, modulations and interruptions. Then find something similarly bold and striking in a different register to provide a breakdown of some sort etc. Hope that helps.
Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 4:05 pm
by fuzz_2k
i like it, infact i like it loads
320?!
Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 6:40 pm
by bils
I don't know what samples you used, but they're very sweet.
the way you put them together is very well done.
good tune man, defnitly!
the change in rhytm at 2 min is very good
man
this track is freakin awesome
I LOVE THIS TRACK!!!!
SENT ME A 320 RIGHT AWAY!!
Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 6:41 pm
by bils
Monotic wrote:For me, the 'classical' melody doesn't really work. Nice bass programming, though. I'd focus on that. Push it further with more variations, modulations and interruptions. Then find something similarly bold and striking in a different register to provide a breakdown of some sort etc. Hope that helps.
btw don't listen to this guy :p your style is unique!
i mean, you can listen to him but this track is really sweet man
i can't stop listening to it!
Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 6:08 pm
by facebreaka
love the song, contains a hell a lot of interesting variations
dreamy, it's like i'm on a trip
excellent for a graf. film
320 me please + your other songs (they're brilliant too)
Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 6:08 pm
by osdenyer
cheers guys for your feedback,
btw i programmed it all, using no samples to answer "bils" question...
......new track coming soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 7:03 pm
by bils
allright, any chance of seeing an mp3 version of exposure?
grtz.
Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 4:42 am
by snf
this tune is awesome! contrast between the complex, light melody and the filthy bass hits me. as others mentioned your breakdowns are sick too - remind me of akira kiteshi - pinball
well produced all around
respect
Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 5:03 am
by drum syndicate
this is a really fun tune. something about that twinkling lead gives it a really playful vibe... and the bassline is nice
would like to hear a clean version of it instead of thru the myspaz player
i think if this was cleaned up and the dynamics were on point this would be a SUPER smasher of a tune
holler!
Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 5:07 am
by drum syndicate
the other 2 tunes are solid too... lots of heavy movement... lots of good sounds
my concern is that you may be mastering these way too loud and that's gonna kill the dynamics of the tunes.
just a suggestion.. go back thru each sample and make sure it's as clean as possible... no clashing frequency ranges between the various samples... this will clean up any mud in there and make sure that the twinkle in your tune has that clean ring to it and your basslines thump and don't clash
you have some solid ideas and I would definitely like to see these bad boys rock on a large system
Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 10:10 pm
by baydestrian
Nice tune.. A little bit cluttered, but good.