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Posted: **Sun Apr 05, 2009 12:49 am**

new member, not expecting many replies but i'd love some feedback!!!!!

www.myspace.com/knifeshowmusic

first track... 320 available on request

thanks!

Posted: **Sun Apr 05, 2009 6:53 am**

Yikes hard to get responses. Even if you don't like it let me know

ill review your stuff in exchange

Posted: **Sun Apr 05, 2009 7:08 pm**

will somebody at least tell me why its hard to get responses? is it my post count? name recognition? wack track? i'd like to become a part of this community but it seems impossible

Posted: **Mon Apr 06, 2009 1:38 am**

Posted: **Mon Apr 06, 2009 2:58 pm**

i feel your pain, its a pain in the arse when no one responds...
my criticism would be i'm not really feeling the kick pattern so much before everything else comes in. maybe vary the velocity on the kicks and make it more groovy, or just do away with the weird non quantised pattern youve got at the start and stick to the patterns that come in later.

overall im feeling some parts of the tune, but it varies too much for a garage tune i think. it's ok, i quite liked it to start with but i dunno, just sort of keeps changing in a way that i dont like.

Posted: **Mon Apr 06, 2009 6:48 pm**

thanks man! very constructive! really appreciate it

Posted: **Mon Apr 06, 2009 8:58 pm**

I know how hard it is to get feedback on here man so no worries...

You always give me feedback, so it's the least I can do.!

d1rt1989 wrote:

"my criticism would be i'm not really feeling the kick pattern so much before everything else comes in. maybe vary the velocity on the kicks and make it more groovy, or just do away with the weird non quantised pattern youve got at the start and stick to the patterns that come in later."

Have to agree, not really feeling the kick patten in the beginning... It just sounds off

I think that the drums samples need just a bit of polishing up, they are good, just not quite bumpin'

I like in the middle of the track, when the full groove kicks in, it has a fun, minimal, vibe to it...

The bass and the synth sounds could probably be louder and a bit heavier.

I would recommend layering em as much as possible, to give your sound some "weight"

Overall, nice tune...

Just tighten it up a little bit

Cheeres

Posted: **Tue Apr 07, 2009 9:47 pm**

thanks man, again very constructive stuff...

really appreciate it!

Posted: **Tue Apr 07, 2009 10:01 pm**

the melodies are sick and the bass sounds good too.. drums are the only thing that sound a little off. nice tune!

Posted: **Wed Apr 08, 2009 7:22 am**

thanks!!!

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