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Despera (epic dubstep)

Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2009 7:19 pm
by jostov
Listen here: www.myspace.com/jostovdub

Thank you.

Posted: Tue Apr 07, 2009 12:33 am
by baydestrian
Good effort.

Going to give you some constructive criticism....

First, I would not refer to your own tunes as "epic," "Massive,"... or anything of the sort...

It comes off as a bit narcissistic, even if the tune is a banger... (no offense)

Let the music tell ppl. that it's "epic"

Not really feeling the intro...

Sounds weird, drags on and it honestly a bit annoying...

Gets better when the bass drops, but it sounds like something is out of key

The tone is off....

Solid start, just try to work on the actual sounds and the arrangement a little bit, and I think that will help you out brother...

Keep it up.