New tune sample, feedback wanted

[_boring]

inspiring man, please try to finish dis wan will feedback more later.

[arktic]

reminds me a dubstep version of Mistabishi's Printer Jam with the printer ish sounding samples, hard to comment if its unfinished cuz all the things i would say are more from a mastering point of view.. but the over all theme of it is cool so thats the important thing, could make a well interesting tune there. i would just say work on the wobble bass abit and try and give it abit more power..sounds like its made in massive right? maybe just and try and bring the cut of down abit to get a few lower freqs in it, seems to much of a gap between the sub and wobble bass. if that makes any sense and defo needs summit like vintagewarmer over it to give it more punch and stop it sounding so flat. might u im new to dub so i may be completely wrong lol keep it up man

[lhd]

Um, I do like the vocal samples. the tune is a mess though. mixing your levels and some basic eq'ing as you go will make everything sound different. the arrangement is so random, try and create some sort of a pattern, 8, 16, 32 bar drops. The drums don't really stand out either so maybe you need to layer a bit better, two snares, two kicks, etc. and your sync is off with your lfo as well. change your attack some in your synthesizer and maybe rework your lfo rate automation. I'm interested in seeing what you can pull of with this thing though. Just make a plan before you start stickin' stuuf together, you'll be happier in the end! Oh yeah, big up for puttin' in the work! Keep it up!

[phosphor]

i think the wobble needs to go. im reeaaallly fucking sick of it .....

[phosphor]

i think the wobble needs to go. im reeaaallly fucking sick of it .....

stereotypical wobble hater?

nope. its just incredibly boring/annoying.

[phosphor]

lol Harshnesss

eh. just my honest opinion.