new tune on myspace

breakbait · Post by **breakbait** » Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:43 pm

please check my latest tune on my space. any thoughts, suggestions, criticism is welcome.

ekaj · Post by **ekaj** » Tue Oct 03, 2006 8:58 pm

Hi I see yer from Leamington! My Dad lives there and I grew up there for a few years when I was a kid (well actually in Warwick, was born in Coventry!)

I checked your track. Nice and subtle. Bass is nice, doesn't sound too artificial. I like the vocal, the little FX diittta diiitta isn't really my kinda sound but it fits nicely.
Only thing I can think of is your drums need a little phattening up. Maybe a few more layers in there as they sound quite dull (not as in boring, but kinda distant in the mix.) Bongos are nice.

Take it ez
Jake

breakbait · Post by **breakbait** » Tue Oct 03, 2006 9:39 pm

cheers for the comments, big up leamington ppl! i'm in cambridge at uni at the moment but go back quite often.

i haven't really worked on it too much, only started it last night. i see what you mean about the drums aswell. need more sfx and stuff aswell i think. will post an update soon.

breakbait · Post by **breakbait** » Wed Oct 04, 2006 12:12 am

slight update added

new tune on myspace

new tune on myspace

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