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Riisk - Entangled Sins [BIG TUNE.] W.i.p

Post by riisk » Sat May 09, 2009 6:25 pm

**Work in process**
Entangled sins

Im sorry about the work in process threads but to be honest. i really like this one.

The synths are crazy!

Anyway leave me some comments !

Link: http://soundcloud.com/riisk/riisk-entangled-sins-4
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Post by machin3 » Sat May 09, 2009 6:57 pm

Nice update, like the drums. Could do with a heavier bass imo. Worth a listen people :) Big Up!!
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Post by riisk » Sat May 09, 2009 9:01 pm

WOW, a whole 27 people have viewed this yet only 5 people have listened.

Thats fucking gay.
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Post by riisk » Sat May 09, 2009 9:38 pm

Bump, hate the lack of actuall listeners -.-
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Post by riisk » Sun May 10, 2009 1:21 am

Bump
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Post by ReturnTrip » Sun May 10, 2009 2:23 am

good melody.but a little short.
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Post by riisk » Sun May 10, 2009 9:35 am

"Wip" stands for work in progress.

That means I'm not done yet!!

Thanks for the feedback anyway.
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Post by davix » Sun May 10, 2009 1:40 pm

over-all this sounds ok, I don't like the way the lead is way emphasized and out of the mix where as it sounds like the drums and bass are pretty much sitting dynamically together. the lead is just too awkwardly out of its place in the mix.
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Post by riisk » Sun May 10, 2009 1:48 pm

I usually start to eq the sounds when im going into a drop so i can work with it easier.

So i havent really got to that.

Im sorting it all out soon.

Thanks for the feedback!
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Post by twobeans » Sun May 10, 2009 2:04 pm

Could use some more bass and a little less on the high end.

Also, the end of your reverb is playing in the beginning of the recording, which is some goofy thing FLstudio does sometimes. Put a block on an empty pattern in the playlist about where that reverb goes silent to take care of this.
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Post by riisk » Sun May 10, 2009 2:09 pm

Yes, i got rid of that this morning.

Thanks for the feedback.
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