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loz6789
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New member, First song ever...

Post by loz6789 » Sat May 09, 2009 8:21 pm

http://soundcloud.com/search/tracks?q=loz6789

Listen to it with good speakers(of course you will)... tell me what you think... be honest :D


(hope the link works) :D

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dubsax outlaw
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Post by dubsax outlaw » Sat May 09, 2009 8:25 pm

the link doesnt work man, or else i would be happy to give feedback. i just put my first tune up too.

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loz6789
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Post by loz6789 » Sat May 09, 2009 8:33 pm

http://soundcloud.com/search/tracks?q=loz6789

this might work...
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loz6789
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Post by loz6789 » Sat May 09, 2009 8:36 pm

ps. yeah I really like "Foghorn". I'm too new to the scene to really be able to give you a valid opinion but I like the bass sound a lot...
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dubsax outlaw
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Post by dubsax outlaw » Sat May 09, 2009 8:59 pm

ya man thanks. you have a killer bass line in there too. the vocoder is a pretty sick touch also haha.
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loz6789
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Post by loz6789 » Sat May 09, 2009 10:24 pm

please tell me what you think about it... :|

40+ reads, 15+ plays, no comments :(
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HangManDubstep
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Post by HangManDubstep » Sun May 10, 2009 2:08 pm

ye man i enjoyed it. did u use fl studio? I like the way it variates. keep it up i like it. u will probably like my tracks.
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Post by caunterstrike » Sun May 10, 2009 2:39 pm

thats a good start. maybe for your next tune you might want to consider leaving more mid range freqs in your bassline cos its sounding a bit to deep and subby. also might wanna consider putting a bit of chorus on your bass. hope that helps.
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Post by wooda916 » Mon May 11, 2009 10:12 am

caunter wrote: ...consider leaving more mid range freqs in your bassline cos its sounding a bit to deep and subby...
lol.
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