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"4 to the Core" 320 pon request.
Posted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 10:51 pm
by brasilico1
any feedback would be appreciated as per usual.
www.myspace.com/brasilico1
1st track " 4 to the core"
Big up everyone that has left feedback so far on my tracks, thats not many, but still, im new!!!
safe.
Posted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 1:27 am
by the lemon pharma
's'up Brasilico...
1st off ur linky ain't workin...missin an 'i'
http://www.myspace.com/brasilico1 would be the right one
It's a pretty cool track, just sounds unfinished imo. Maybe it needs more to it, it just seems to me the 4/4 beat n a bassline thru a lot of the tune. Possibly chucking in some of that nice piano bit sliced up and delaying in the tune itself would be cool. But u may be going for that minimal effect huh?
You got some progression in there, which i like, and usually find a lot of dubstep tunes need more of.
I like the vibe in that intro... it just doesn't quite deliver for me on the drop, that goes for the second one also. But that's only a matter of opinion... Still... nice tune man!
Oh yeah, i like the lil amen breaks u got in there also
Posted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 7:41 pm
by brasilico1
yeah, i think your right actually. it is suopposed to be minimal but i think its a little too bare. Am gona fix it up!!!
lemon and peas