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odiecreversed
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First track feedback?

Post by odiecreversed » Thu Jul 16, 2009 12:28 pm

Yo,

http://finlaybelcher.co.uk/artwork/HealthClub.mp3

If I could get some feedback on this it'd be good. I've been making various music tracks for a couple of years now but I'm still reasonably unsure about some stuff.

Structure of the track is a bit out of whack too I think? Anyway I just want to get better, so any constructive criticism or tips welcome.

Cheers.
Last edited by odiecreversed on Fri Jul 17, 2009 1:32 am, edited 2 times in total.
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odiecreversed
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Post by odiecreversed » Fri Jul 17, 2009 1:03 am

Man... anything at all to say?
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Post by btheturntabilist » Fri Jul 17, 2009 1:22 am

heavy
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mr. blue
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Post by mr. blue » Fri Jul 17, 2009 1:29 am

i like this track alot.


ups to you sir.
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zoomed
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Post by zoomed » Fri Jul 17, 2009 8:06 am

bigness mang
feels like the kick is sittin too high...and sub feels a tad too low...or jus quiet
huge for a first track...keep em comin!!
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