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First track feedback?

Posted: Thu Jul 16, 2009 12:28 pm
by odiecreversed
Yo,

http://finlaybelcher.co.uk/artwork/HealthClub.mp3

If I could get some feedback on this it'd be good. I've been making various music tracks for a couple of years now but I'm still reasonably unsure about some stuff.

Structure of the track is a bit out of whack too I think? Anyway I just want to get better, so any constructive criticism or tips welcome.

Cheers.

Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 1:03 am
by odiecreversed
Man... anything at all to say?

Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 1:22 am
by btheturntabilist
heavy

Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 1:29 am
by mr. blue
i like this track alot.


ups to you sir.

Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 8:06 am
by zoomed
bigness mang
feels like the kick is sittin too high...and sub feels a tad too low...or jus quiet
huge for a first track...keep em comin!!